Good concept and jumping from point. I would suggest that you help the viewer recognize the concept/idea much sooner. If there is a story/backboard to the film, then the action needs to allude to such.
interesting idea to incorporate man-made space with natural things (flowers) using digital technology which is man-made. this could be an idea for a larger project.
for the stop-motion, playing with light like i mentioned before might add drama and highlight the constructed "drama" of the scenario to make the whimsical nature of the action even more exaggerated.
I really like the length of your stop motion film. It's cute! I think that you could expand on collaging even more elements and pictures to the second photo.
I LOVE THE VIDEO. I am obsessed with the fairy tale. I love the end of a fairy tale and I love the story behind it so personally I completely understood the video. The picture below is really cute...but I'm not gonna lie the video is a showstopper.
I like the picture you made. It feels like in Thailand..?! The colors were great. Also the video was cute and very easy to get your point. The idea of a "monster" was interesting...
I like your second photo, but maybe add more flowers or objects to make t more interesting...like you can't even tell there is a couch. The flowers are beautiful and the elephant is interesting, so add more to the photo to add to the concept, or just for more detail. The stop motion is a little confusing...it took me the second time around to realize the monster is a monster. Maybe have the stop motion be all drink cans that take on the identity of their brand.
I think your stop-motion is very sweet and has a great concept, but I think the can of monster is confusing. I think if you used a stuffed dinosaur or Godzilla thing instead it might be more understandable.
Your second picture reminds me of one of the MSU guest lecturers from last semester, Jessica Jackson Hutchins. She put ceramics on couches as well.
I love the idea of the stop motion, maybe you could utilize light more to add to the story. I also think you could take it a step further to clarify the idea of a monster and fighting the monster.
For the first photo, maybe add more flowers to add depth.
I enjoy the stop motion...I think maybe you could take it further with more scenes and backgrounds. I also think the elephant planter is interesting by itself...maybe you could get it in some different places.
It is a really cute stop motion, I like the idea behind it and I think it will turn out really nicely.
ReplyDeleteGood concept and jumping from point. I would suggest that you help the viewer recognize the concept/idea much sooner. If there is a story/backboard to the film, then the action needs to allude to such.
ReplyDeleteI love the video good composition include more perhaps. Try using a different subject or dynamic lighting.
ReplyDeleteinteresting idea to incorporate man-made space with natural things (flowers) using digital technology which is man-made. this could be an idea for a larger project.
ReplyDeletefor the stop-motion, playing with light like i mentioned before might add drama and highlight the constructed "drama" of the scenario to make the whimsical nature of the action even more exaggerated.
The stop motion is cute! I like the bright colors in your second image and maybe it would be nice to include more or more figurines.
ReplyDeleteI really like the length of your stop motion film. It's cute! I think that you could expand on collaging even more elements and pictures to the second photo.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THE VIDEO.
ReplyDeleteI am obsessed with the fairy tale. I love the end of a fairy tale and I love the story behind it so personally I completely understood the video.
The picture below is really cute...but I'm not gonna lie the video is a showstopper.
I like the picture you made. It feels like in Thailand..?! The colors were great. Also the video was cute and very easy to get your point. The idea of a "monster" was interesting...
ReplyDeleteI like your second photo, but maybe add more flowers or objects to make t more interesting...like you can't even tell there is a couch. The flowers are beautiful and the elephant is interesting, so add more to the photo to add to the concept, or just for more detail.
ReplyDeleteThe stop motion is a little confusing...it took me the second time around to realize the monster is a monster. Maybe have the stop motion be all drink cans that take on the identity of their brand.
I think your stop-motion is very sweet and has a great concept, but I think the can of monster is confusing. I think if you used a stuffed dinosaur or Godzilla thing instead it might be more understandable.
ReplyDeleteYour second picture reminds me of one of the MSU guest lecturers from last semester, Jessica Jackson Hutchins. She put ceramics on couches as well.
I love the idea of the stop motion, maybe you could utilize light more to add to the story. I also think you could take it a step further to clarify the idea of a monster and fighting the monster.
ReplyDeleteFor the first photo, maybe add more flowers to add depth.
I enjoy the stop motion...I think maybe you could take it further with more scenes and backgrounds. I also think the elephant planter is interesting by itself...maybe you could get it in some different places.
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